manvsbear's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Tinman]

Tis ok

Good animation. Interesting idea. But the "empty" flashing every 3 seconds took me right out of it. It was very distracting.

BlackmarketKraig responds:

Thanks for the complement about the animation. :)

I can see how the flashes of empty might be distracting... oh, well.
Too late to change anything now, I should think. Everything is a learning experience though?

Thanks for reviewing.

[Cletus the Fetus ep 65]

Why do you recycle old crap.

I have watched you place your old cartoons on Newgrounds for the quite some time now. And when I say old, I mean years. Douche bag. P.S. none of your shit is funny

[Vicious Gore - Short]

Hmm

It would be so much better if they weren't sticks. If you are going to put that much time into creating smooth animation and blood spatter, you might as well draw some real people.

[Gandalf's 'Adventures']

Impressive animating skill.

If you are indeed 13 years old, you have a great future in animation. Yet you must work on your story telling. It lacked severely and good artwork alone can not save a piece. Also, sound is the MOST important part of any short film or animation, work on your sound design and you shall be grand.

green-lotus responds:

Yup, I'm 13, and I am greatly pleased that you think I have a good future (as do i :P). So now on I must work harder, especially on sound, and story!

[It's Raining It's Boring]

deese

decent. Lets learn about streaming sound shall we... and just a pointer... the reason that comedy is funny is because of timing... work on yours. bye!

[Armless Boy]

Decent.

Very nice. I was impressed with the style you chose, very noir! good ending... but... I really hate "fin",,, ANNOYING... YOU ARE NOT FRENCH... GO HOME.

[Broken Saints CHAPTER 13]

...

I'm not sure why, but I am not impressed with any of the "broken saints"... not a single one floats my boat. In fact, the only reason for this reveiw is to ridicule you for the roman numerals. IIII is not four, IV is. Ha... Ha... Ha. Go home

[The Andrew Show (Ep 1)]

Potential.

For 13 your animating skills are amazing. Your ability with the mouse is great and you should stick with it. One thing you need to work on, story! Even the best drawn cartoon is still no better than it's writer. Learn the art of telling a story, and learn comedic timing. You could be great.

[Jokes & Croaks]

Good

I was impressed with your backgounds and dawing skills. However, as for content and animation - lacking. With artistic skill such as yours excellence is expected. Learn to stream your sound so it matches the animation. It was also very long, as it went on I was waiting for it to finish.

[Master Tutorial]

Amateurs should not make tut's

Really bad. You had a good idea, but a teacher is supposed to be good at what he is teaching. Sorry but you suck... and as for the music part, you can import music after creating all the buttons and the actionscripting, if you were advanced enough you would know that. Stick to making crappy animations until you get better. BYE