manvsbear's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Qrip 2]

Has problems.

First, the reason the sound doesn't sync up is because you set the sound to "event" instead of "stream". As for the graphics and animation... pretty weak. I must say it does show that you put at least some effort into drawing so I'll give you that. But the animation was repetative, especailly during the fight scene. The arms and legs waving was extremely corny, and hilarious by the way. But I am guessing it wasn't supposed to be funny, which means you failed. Also the fight scene was far, far too long. I feel this had an anime feel to it, maybe go for more anime type animation. focus less on backgrounds and more on action. One more thing... if you are going to use backgrounds, chnage them when you cut to a different person, the backgrounds stayed the same throughout the fight scene. Overall, Fair, but if could be better.

[Mouse]

Where to start?

You mention in one of your respones to a review that you couldn't be bothered to put sound in it. You obviously were bothered enough to bother us with this flash. Why not finish what you started? This cartoon is poor, nothing more, nothing less.

Bloodiestkebab responds:

wow :D you read my bagel whore thing! bagels are damn tasty by the way. and yes, i couldnt be bothered, this is just a crappy school asignment. its not my fault if people didnt blam me.

[Booty-Dance 3]

Disgraceful

I feel shame for you. Everything you submit to Newgrounds is crap. Don't get me wrong... it looks snazy and all, and you may have put a lot of work into it. But all you do is import video (someone else's work) and trace the bitmap. Shame, shame, shame. Can you not animate, have you no originality? Please, do us all a favor. DO NOT APPROPRIATE OTHER PEOPLE'S WORK. goodbye.

[Life, So far...]

It was Ok.

I really liked the idea behind this thing. You could have done a better job animating, and giving us a little more. No need for the long running scene. Also, no-one uses "fin" anymore at the end of their films unless it is a joke.

[Cletus the Fetus ep 53]

I see a pattern. Patterns can be bad.

This is a little funny. But your jokes seem like a mediocre version of southpark. Even the girlish voice the guys does is so similar to cartman's girly voice, I found myself mildly embarressed. Also, males can't quief... that is strickly a female talent. Overall, good job.

[The Civil War - Hotc]

too educational

Come on, way too educational for newgrounds... funny in an eduactional sort of way. On par with mr rogers

Rammer responds:

live with it. you dont have to see it as educational, i guess. it shouldnt be wrong to try to educate ng with civil war guns, should it? if anything, some people on ng need to get something in their heads.

[Stupid artist!]

you have potential!

This was a teaser. But teasers get blamed... that's a fact. you have skills, I can tell, USE THEM. You could make a really good FBF flash if you spent some time on it... please do it,
I am interested to see what you can do!

Moonlight-Dragun responds:

yes this was just for fun. the flash i'm currently working on is nothing like this at all. i hope you have a chance to see it once i'm done.

[[ Forever ]]

Good, but...

Good storyline, but develop it more. Also, the flashback scene needed to be searated from the current action more. Maybe use alpha? or tint?.... either way good movie!

[Cold Blooded Killer]

Very good.

I don
t usually write reviews but this one... i had to. Good fbf animation, awsonme style. BUT... the story was lacking... who was this guy, where did her come from, what is up for grabs? Who is the ultimate enimy?... one more thing, the KABOOM was so unecessary it's not even funny!!!!

mchawking responds:

KABOOM haha, I was trying to emphasize that this is just for fun, obviously a grenade isn't going to create an explosion like that, ya know?

~Nate

[It's time]

Good. I enjoy your cartoons.

I like just about everything you have on here. But i do have some criticisms. First, I don't like your use of cuts when you animate. I'm talking about the constant zooming in on a charachters face when they are talking. It is very distracting, and the overall idea of cutting is to keep the action flowing without the audience noticing the cut. Second, the way you animate the eyes blinking is very annoying. Not only do they blink too much, but the eyes boune on their face along with the eye brows. Not to be too critical, but when animations are this good, the details stand out more.