manvsbear's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Tinman]

Tis ok

Good animation. Interesting idea. But the "empty" flashing every 3 seconds took me right out of it. It was very distracting.

BlackmarketKraig responds:

Thanks for the complement about the animation. :)

I can see how the flashes of empty might be distracting... oh, well.
Too late to change anything now, I should think. Everything is a learning experience though?

Thanks for reviewing.

[Gandalf's 'Adventures']

Impressive animating skill.

If you are indeed 13 years old, you have a great future in animation. Yet you must work on your story telling. It lacked severely and good artwork alone can not save a piece. Also, sound is the MOST important part of any short film or animation, work on your sound design and you shall be grand.

green-lotus responds:

Yup, I'm 13, and I am greatly pleased that you think I have a good future (as do i :P). So now on I must work harder, especially on sound, and story!

[The Civil War - Hotc]

too educational

Come on, way too educational for newgrounds... funny in an eduactional sort of way. On par with mr rogers

Rammer responds:

live with it. you dont have to see it as educational, i guess. it shouldnt be wrong to try to educate ng with civil war guns, should it? if anything, some people on ng need to get something in their heads.

[Stupid artist!]

you have potential!

This was a teaser. But teasers get blamed... that's a fact. you have skills, I can tell, USE THEM. You could make a really good FBF flash if you spent some time on it... please do it,
I am interested to see what you can do!

Moonlight-Dragun responds:

yes this was just for fun. the flash i'm currently working on is nothing like this at all. i hope you have a chance to see it once i'm done.

[Cold Blooded Killer]

Very good.

I don
t usually write reviews but this one... i had to. Good fbf animation, awsonme style. BUT... the story was lacking... who was this guy, where did her come from, what is up for grabs? Who is the ultimate enimy?... one more thing, the KABOOM was so unecessary it's not even funny!!!!

mchawking responds:

KABOOM haha, I was trying to emphasize that this is just for fun, obviously a grenade isn't going to create an explosion like that, ya know?

~Nate

[Skate To Snow 1]

ok,,,, this is pretty good for the first movie

just a few things wrond...... the music sucks... the guys head never turns.... and i bet you suck at skating and snowboarding...come the evergreen and i will show your ass up bitch!!

kampo responds:

You knowz I be ripin da shit up when I be skatin' fuck face.